Sunday 25 February 2018

New term

What a first week back! The children have been enthusiastically writing their own 500 word story to enter BBC Radio 2's short story competition. The children had a chance to judge a range of stories and then look at what made good ones. They then cracked on with writing and editing their story. Below are all of their stories for you to enjoy. All work has been typed by the children and edited by them as well.           

Mr lonely man by Liam
One day a man named Jamie slowly cruised around London in his Lamborghini Aventador S. But this man may be sickeningly rich, he may have diamond grills, but he is HAUNTED by people’s ghosts. Everyone stays away from him because he’s the HAUNTED. He does street racing and his car flipped and it caught a light. Ambulances rushed to the car and quickly got him to the hospital. After five long hours they fixed him and he went home. He had to pay for the car to be fixed. The cost was horrendous!!!!
Hi still buys things like Gucci and Rolex. He is blowing up all over the internet he makes, animated Lego films. But nobody knows it’s him and I am his only friend.
He would like to make friends. But know body likes him Jamie he is now cursed and I hope he gets friends.
Jamie is nice funny and respectful. We’ve been friends since year5 then everybody liked him. But he got good grades he was really smart but then but then he got kidnapped.     
He has a massive car collection he has a ice white Roils Royce a silver chrome Lamborghini red Ferrari and a blue Bugatti. He loves his life he s got everything he’s got a mansion cars but. There’s one thing he doesn’t have friends.
I wish he gets friends. But this is how he got friends. He was crying everyone gave him chocolates and they and they said were sorry for not being your friends.



Star born by Bethany
All I remember of that fateful hour is falling, falling then a scream and a splash. My lungs screaming for air and thinking I didn’t want to die, not yet anyway. And obviously the man in the moon thought I shouldn’t die as well, because he saved me. For here I am a normal girl with a normal life- at least in the day time. At night I am cat. Queen of the night prowling my territory, hunting. And that’s how it works, at night I am cat and in the day I am human. Except for tonight. I waited and waited to be human again but it never came. I was cat.
I had to find someone to help me! Scampering down the stairs I ran through the open front door onto the street. Suddenly I stopped and sat there, puzzling who should I go to? Who would know?
Then it struck me. No one would know except the man in the moon what he did to save me. But one person knew I survived the fall and he would get me to the moon. Bob.
When I arrived at Bob’s house it was already lunch time so I caught a mouse to eat. Walking into Bob’s house I saw he was in the kitchen.
“Bob-I started.
“WHAT THE???”Bob shouted.
“Whoa Bob-,”
“You are a talking cat!” he gasped.
“I know, let me explain. I am Emily. You know I survived the fall…”
After I had explained why I was a cat Bob decided to help me. Bob owns a space station and his company has lots of rockets so he was going to help me get to the moon and find the man on the moon.
A few days later we went to space! I felt amazing.
Arriving on the moon we were very lucky to find the man on the moon in five minutes. We asked him how to turn me back to human. He said the only way to turn me back was to a normal girl is to make this potion. Here are the ingredients; I have the first one. Moon dust, fire from the sun, two phoenix tears and a single piece of stardust.
So off we set to find the ingredients to get the stardust we caught a passing star. And to get the sun’s flame the moon man used his magic. Then he gave us a map to a secret stash of phoenix tears.
“Yay that’s near my house,” I exclaimed.
Back on earth we started digging. Finally I found a chest. Bob opened it and inside was ten phoenix tears. I took two. Finally I was going to be my old self a sixteen year old girl with long wavy ginger hair and piercing green eyes.
Two hours later.

Drinking the potion I was full of Joy. Then nothing happened! My spirits sinking I was filled with sadness. I was never going to be human again. POP! Oh I am human.


FNaF by Oliver

It was a dark and stormy night when it happened, when the five children went missing. And this is how it happened.
I was working on the night shift one night and it was all fine until I got given a task. I was horrified with the task because I had to survive Five Nights at Freddy’s (FNaF) I was so mad.
Later (about 7 hours) I opened the beautiful bright florescent red doors to the wet, mossy, broken down pizzeria and over 600 young, crazy children came storming in and sat right in front of the stage with the animatronics on, but some went to sit at the party tables. All could hear the robots sing. The animatronics sung their favourite song, lots of yummy pizzas and ice creams where handed out to all of the children.
BOOM.Then the robots went incognito and started laughing creepily.
None of the children heard because they were too focused in getting their food. Because of the power everyone had to leave earlier than usual, but only 595 children survived.
The shop started shaking like it was being picked up by a colossal Giant but it was the animatronics eating drinking blood that looked exactly like human blood. I didn’t know what to do when I heard a child screaming QUIETLY. So I ran over to my office and started my very own night shift (Night 2 12am Power 100%) then the phone started to ring,
“Uh hello hello uh we have a new friend at Freddy Fazbear’s pizza (the place I work at) his name is Golden Freddy.”
Because I was so scared I ran out of the office and got trapped by Golden Freddy, and then a lady came in with a frying pan and knocked out Golden Freddy
“Are you okay?” She asked me creepily.
“Do I look okay?” I screamed in her face
 “No but we should go!”   
“Why?”
“There’s a bomb inside the kitchen on an unreachable shelf!”
As the kitchen started smoking, the girl and I got knocked out by Golden Freddy and dragged back into the office. When we woke up we ran as quick as flash out of the smashed dirty doors and the whole pizzeria blew up into dust and it was all over the news.
About a year later, the news went crazy about a new Freddy Fazbear’s Pizza. So, being the stupid me I am, I signed up to the training grounds of the night shift and it was nothing different to the old pizzeria. The only thing that was different was the animatronics.
The pizzeria was massive so it was hard to get around.  The only place I could go to stay alone for a while until the night shift started, the night shift is exactly the same just I have no doors too shut and just two vents to the left and right of me. I was terrified when I started but I just knew I would survive heroically. 

                                                                                                                                


A light by Lilly
“Oh no” I said as I see a bright shiny light growing and growing. Then a big scream came for up stair.  It was my brother. I think he was hungry. Then my mum and dad ran up the stair like a hungry patch chasing it delicious prey. I look back the weird light got bigger and bigger. Then the wood bookcase got caught on red flaming fire.
Then I screamed “FIRE GET OUT NOW”
So my parent and my cute dog ran out the door screamed too. Then the fire alarm went off beep. Then I start to fall asleep.
Four hour later, a nice man picked me up and said “you have passed out your parent are outside with your brother and your fluffy cute dog chase”.
“Okay” I said I was in fear as he dropped me on the freezing cold wet grass.
My mum asked “are you all okay now”
  We all said “yes we are”
Then the dog bark at someone in the freezing cold black might night sky...
“Mum where are we going to life?” I said as I sat in the car.
“At nana’s and papa” mum asked.
Okay” I said as we got in the car to nana and papa.
One year and two months later we are now back at are magic sweet home it is as nice as it ever be. Then a little weird man came knocking on are bright white door. He look like the person for one year and two months ago. I open the door and the man said “are your parent home?”
“Yes MUM” I screamed as she came running down the stair like a tiger. Then my mum shut the door on his tiny little face and I said “who was that mum”
“Nobody” my mum said as she walk away in tears.

“what was that” I said as I went up stair sitting and think what going on    


Blood Moon by Alfie C
I shouldn’t have done that, why did I brainlessly agree to stay home alone on a crazy blood moon. I was totally fine with this but when the babysitter disappeared then I realized my gargantuan mistake. Well either way, I hated her. She had braces, blonde hair and worst of all, she was one of those stupid over happy people…
“Yes an amazing 60 kills, a new record.” I exclaimed to my friends over the amazing Xbox.
“Well done Jeff!” Luke and Archie said in a very congratulating way.
“Hello?” I ask. They stop talking.
“Helloooo!”I say getting very annoyed
Whsssssshhhhhhhhh!!!
I cautiously turn around to see IM COMING FOR YOU!!!
Written in what MUST definitely be ketchup.
“Ok guys stop trying to scare me… Is this about the who’s the manliest competition that I won!” I shout.
The illuminating lights flicker!
Suddenly I saw a dirty face dart past my face like a lightning bolt striking the ground. I look to the left and the once clean window is an open and mosey window!
Slowly I crept down the weirdly creaky stairs like a cat prancing around, to see if my epic, red nerf gun was still lying steadily on top of the warm, brick fireplace.
“Mwhahahaha!”
There it was again! Stupidly, I stumble down mindlessly towards the dark, damp creepy basement. Speedily I jump behind a broken down, rusty oven. I hear him opening old, wooden cupboards and rummaging through shiny, new plane parts, until he comes to the rusty, broken oven, suddenly in extreme anger he kicks the oven with his black sorrel boots with sharp metal spikes on the heel and front. Then I let out a screech of unthinkable pain. “Gotcha!!” he said creepily!

I opened my eyes to see dim flickering red lights and a small metal cage which was very disgusting I can smell toxic gas, I can hear the ear ringing noise of a distant pipe dripping echoing through the never ending tunnels of doom!

“Oh your awake… I’ve seen you playing Fortnite and ALWAYS losing but on my special BIRTHDAY you, a little puny, stupid child, just get up and decide to over through me THE EPIC KOLEY! So now I will win by killing you and there is nothing you can do about it... Farewell!” Koley said He threw in a scary five minute delay grenade.
“NO NO” I shouted
“IT’S NOT RIGHT!!!!!” I exclaimed
“NO NO NO No No No NO NO No NO NO NO NO NO NO NO No NO NO NO!!!!!!”
BOOOOOOOM!!!!








Mysteries and letters by Kayleigh

A few days ago we got a letter, we don’t know where from or who from, but it was addressed to me!
I stole the letter away to my room and hid it in a draw so I could eat my dinner without worrying about anyone finding it. After I had eaten I ran upstairs and I was about to open it when my obnoxious brother raced up the stairs and barged in to my room.
“Amy!” he screamed.
“What are you doing?” I questioned whilst shoving the letter up my shirt.
“Where is the letter? “He asked.
“With mum” I replied.
“You liar! It is not with mum because I have already asked her and she said that it was with you and – “
“Amy, another letter!” mum hollered.
Max, my brother, shoved me out the way, tumbled down the stairs and almost grabbed the letter out of her hand. When I came downstairs my mum handed me the letter and I took my letter out of my shirt and sat on a chair in the kitchen, I opened the letter and read it, it said: How was Sunday school? How did they know I went to Sunday school? I put the letter in the bin and opened the other it said: Look behind you. I didn’t want to but I was too tempted to, so I cautiously turned around and there just standing and staring at me was a tall mysterious figure dressed in black. I wanted to run but I was frozen to the spot.
Suddenly mum ambled in she asked me what I was doing, I stumbled around with my words and could say nothing that made sense. I managed to move my legs and went to find my dad. Then my phone beeped, I pulled it out of my pocket and checked it, it read: If you want your dad come and get him! I didn’t know what to do. I darted upstairs, ran in to my bedroom and locked the door, all I could do is re-read the text over and over again. Finally I decided to tell my mum. I climbed down the stairs and with tears in my eyes I whispered it to her. I showed the letter and the text but she didn’t believe me. I screamed and shouted at her but all she said was: very convincing but I am still not buying it. I ran outside to search for clues of the kidnapping but all I could find was a footprint in the cold, unforgiving snow.
Despite searching for years, under bridges, in the darkest alleys and in every house in the entire city I never found my dad, and even today I am still searching for him and I will find him no matter what.
A few years later I tracked him down in an old abandoned barn. I went inside and looked everywhere but I could only find a dusty old skeleton hopefully it isn’t my dad!



I AM… by Emma
Waking up in my cold damp store waiting to be bought by a human of some kind.
“Look over there!” wailed Bob “It’s a human!”
All of a sudden, my friends and I get picked up by a mystery person and bought! Going across the conveyer belt, I felt so happy I will die. 
When I finally get to the owner’s house they just throw us on the horrible, wooden table. Sitting on the table, I watch my glamorous owner emptying her shopping bag.
Can we move from this tiny table which is horrible!
Just then my best friend (Amy) fell on the terrible dirty floor! I try to run after her but it is too late. She’s gone! So I jump down to see if I can find her.
It’s now been three hours since I jumped down from the horrible, wooden table to find here and I still haven’t found her. The kitchen is empty and so is the bathroom. I also try bedroom. No she’s no were to be seen. I look under the bed, the sink, the over. I have look under everything but there is still no Amy. I go to the garden and I see a puppy so no I am not going out there.
At this point I don’t think I will find her anywhere. But then I remember I have not looked in the living room and that’s the last room. I hope she is in there!   
I went to the living room. There standing in front of me, a little yellow thing in the distance. IT’S AMY! I try to run after her but she keep running away.
We are now in the garden and I am running and running to catch her. Amy finally stopped so I can talk to her. I hope she will listen to me!
“Please come back with me? Then we can go on adventure together. Also I can help you with whatever you need help with.” I cried
“Why should I come back with you? You’re a stranger to me.” scream Amy
I think she’s evil I thought to myself.
“Because I am your best friend.” I try to explain to her.
 “FINE” she said sarcastically
When we are back inside, I look for a spell book to remove her spell. But before I do anything I lay her down so she does not run away.
“AH! Here it is, the spell book.” I said
Firstly make her fall to sleep using a potion,
Secondly give her magic dust,
Thirdly wait for her to wake up.
OH NO! My friends and family are getting EATEN!!!
Who do I save! Amy and myself or my friends and family?
But it’s too late now to decide because we have all been eaten by the horrible owner, so there is no point.
OH I forgot to tell you who I am. I am a green and my friends are rainbow coloured.

Well I am a Fizzer of course.

 TRUST by Grace


Trust no man to which you see no equal! These were the life changing lines echoing through my mind as I was taken from the wild home of my ancestors by a grave faced illegal horse trainer who would eventually sell me and as I am a New Forest I will sell for about six or seven hundred pounds.  The last distant cry of my mother left the cramped horse box as it drove off along winding roads.
Later on, the back of the horse truck opened to a small fence and I was roughly tugged in. The old oak gate closed behind me and as a muddy bookcase patterned rug draped over my back, then secured in place a blue bucket of feed was placed under my nose. The feed consisted of grained red apple, rolled oats and wheat.
Some few hours later I saw an old grey shire plodding towards me. “You’re new. You came in on the last load of horses didn’t you? ” He interrupted my thoughts, but it was a welcome change! “Yes I think so!” I stuttered back.
The following day I was in the mud-covered grass when I heard a horse bray in the nearby grove of trees I recognised it as my concerned mother, I miss her a lot. I have to find a way out!
The next warm day some weeks later; I think the sunrise is like a million tiny red flowers opening their delicate petals to greet the world with warm rays of sun! The mountains and home are far from here although I could see the snowy-topped peaks of the mountains.
As the sky darkened the wind picked up I was under a saddle. Riding round the field in the rain. The cruel man riding me, who was a skilled rider kicked me with some force! It wouldn’t be me in pain for too much longer… I broke into a canter for him following his orders.
I kicked my back legs out sending the unpleasant man tumbling to the ground, he had a rip in his trousers below the knee! Nine words and I saw my chance, saying goodbye to the stable-dwelling Frisian, the chubby greedy Shetland and the laid back shire with huge grey flares.
As the stumbling man clambered to his feet and limped towards me! Filling with fear I bolted. Clearing the rickety fence in my path (it was nearly in pieces). Mud and grass flew in the air, desperately I searched the dense forest under the mountains looking for a decent spot to shake the saddle and the bridle off! I came to a clearing with a huge tree placed in the centre. This could work… Eventually I managed to free myself, now I needed to find my mother. Turning round to face the mountains I saw her, her shadow was majestic against the watercolour shaded sky, with the rest of our herd spread behind her like a long robe. I fled towards her.



                               

CHOWLOW GETS FRIENDS by Connor

“Hello.” Said a mysterious high voice to Juan.
“Would you like some tacos?” Asked Juan.
“Uh no thanks. I need help. Replied the voice.
“What is your name?” Asked Juan
“My name is Chowlow.”
“I’m Juan, what are you doing here?”
“I’m trying to find a friend, now I’m alive, and you were the closest person to my shelf.”
“Okay Chowlow, how about I get you a friend.”      “Good idea let’s try.”
“So here’s David Lopez who is one of my best friends.” Said Juan happily to Chowlow
“Juan, I hate you.” Replied David in an angry tone.
“I don’t want to barge in here, but I want to know if David can be a good friend to me other-wise I don’t think I can get a friend. Said chowlow feeling worried.
Don’t worry Chowlow I’m sure that Juan can find you a good friend how about josh. He a good friend. Said David to the both of them.    
Good idea David lets go chowlow, thanks Dave. Juan shouted back.

Then they rushed over to josh’s house to try.
“So Josh I’m trying to find Chowlow a friend and David said that you would be a good friend to him. Juan picks up Chowlow to show josh. “Hello josh.” Said Chowlow in a nervous voice.
“Hello Chowlow, what do you like to do?”
“I like to dance but I’m not very good.”
“Let’s see what you can do."
Then Chowlow spins once and does a backflip.
“That’s amazing, why did you say you’re bad?” asked josh
“Because that’s all I can do.” Replied Chowlow in a sad tone.
 “I’m going to teach you more so you can get in a competition.
“Good idea Josh what shall we do said chowlow with excitement.
“How about you spin three times instead of one and after the backflip you can do a rolly poley and after that you can do jazz hands for the finish. Try it.”
So Chowlow practiced the moves for ½ and hour. But they finally got the moves.
 Now let’s find a dance competition, we could get money for it as well.”
 “There is one in Canada tomorrow, which is good since we live in America.” Said Juan
So they flew over to Canada for the competition .

After the competition
“Hi I’m the mayor and I’m looking for a dancer and you got the skills for it, so what do you say?”
“No thanks, I’m staying home with my friends. Let’s go home. So you thought he wouldn’t get a friend, no friendship can be found, even on a shelf. well I’m out PEACE!
                       


The End of the World. by Ethan

One slippery day a car crashed into an oak tree. Sadly one person called Tom died instantly as he flew through the window.
The noise of his footsteps making a haunting noise. It sounded like a ghost. But it wasn’t. He was a mad scientist.
He brought Tom back to his lab. The lab was like an empty room but with loads of machines. It was extremely echoey. The scientist chucked tom on a table and plugged loads of wires into him.
The scientist selected the most deadly cyborg by typing what cyborg he wanted.
Tom swiftly mutated into a horrifying cyborg. A wave of metal rapidly flew smoothly through his body.
The scientist programmed it only to destroy the world- that was its ultimate mission.
Then the deadly cyborg had a plan.
But there was a person called Bob that knew his plan who wanted to stop the deadly cyborg.
Bob knew his plan because he had spies in the mad scientist’s lab.
The cyborg smashed through the roof, flying towards the abyss.
The battle had begun. They fired millions of bullets but every time it made him stronger taller more powerful- bigger. The world was destroyed.



The Unlucky Sunday by William
On a weekend in a lab a scientist was doing a deadly experiment. Freddie was chilling on a coal black bean bag posting some things on Snapchat.
The scientist vigorously flicked the switch on the grey giant laser gun and shot a green beam at a mirror, it bounced off the mirror and hit Freddie. Freddie became the coal black bean bag!
The scientist thought with curiosity; I wonder where Freddie went? He probably went to the Skate Park, the scientist thought reassuringly.
So the scientist hangs his lab coat and puts on his rain coat, then travels home.
Then the assistant came along and calmly flopped on Freddie, “What are you doing?” “That’s my head you’re sitting on!!” The lady got up in shock to see no one there.
“Oh no don’t do it, don’t do it! Wow you really had to drop one in my face! EHH,” Freddie said agitatedly.
“There’s another rip in it. I can’t be bothered to stitch another patch, this is going in the trash,” the lady said with depression.
OH, NO! Freddie thought. Not the trash, “HEY IM NOT A RAT!!”
A few tragic minutes later the smelly dust bin van came and collected the trash (along with Freddie,) and gets unloaded at the dump. Then Freddie finds something he didn’t think he would find, human lifeform but it’s just a dirty, filthy homeless man. What are you doing to me? Freddie thought, whilst the homeless man carefully lifted Freddie and held some old rusty scissors to him. The homeless man impatiently started cutting and turned Freddie into a coal black pair of socks. “OMG, your feet are green and mouldy. Is this really how I’m going to live the rest of my life? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

The big adventure by Jade

It started like a normal day. Get up for school, get dressed, have breakfast, then out in the car.
Maths is our first lesson second lesson was English. The day pasted slowly, but finally it was time for home. Then I get dressed to ride the horses.
Mum and I drove to the horse’fild. Thyme and Halo were watching us as we approached the stables Thyme pushed her head into my shoulder as I cuddled her.
I take thyme out of the stables to clean her stinky mess. First I groom her, then tack her up. That means putting the saddle on, girth and bridle. And I will get my hat and body protector.
Now I will get on and enjoy a lovely peaceful ride in the beautiful forest.
Suddenly a clown popped up from the long green grass and I went around him and he was chasing me but I was faster than him so I found a shortcut to the stable and I loss him when I got there I think he seen my mum.
I dismounted then I untack when I put the tack away then I put the rugs on then put the horses in the field and in the morning I put them in the stables.
I went on a ride and I saw the same clown then the other day but he was with two other clown I tried to hide but they saw me so I went but there did not come after me but they hided and they chid to scar me but I saw them and I know who they were and then I just said ‘hi Luke, Koley and Connor what are you doing’
‘How did you know it was us’ said[JT1]  Luke  
‘It a bit easy to see it was you as I know how tall you are’ I said    
‘I told you’ said Koley ‘It wasn’t me it was Luke’s fault said Connor ‘NO it not it Connor fault’ said Luke
I said stop fighting it no one Fault. So do you what to come back with me I can take you home but I just need to untack and put Thyme rug on and put her out so you can back with me so let’s go.
Here we are at my stables. Ok let’s go should we have some music yeah Ed Sheerin. Ok here we are. Thank you it ok bye. Bye


What really happens in a zoo by Eleanor

No one knows what happens in a zoo. When the lights go off. By the light of the moon. The truth is, they talk, conversations about the visitors and keepers. About who’s going next.
“Amy gave me extra bamboo today,” gloated Remy the red panda. “Shame it’s her turn tonight.”
“Oh yeah, it is,” said Heidi the hippo. “Who’s doing it?”
“I am.” Leona the leopard said, voice as smooth as silk.
“Her best friend!” Annoyingly joked Lucius the lion.
“ME AND AMY ARE NOT BEST FRIENDS!,” Leona shouted. “I just manipulate her for food.”
“Well it doesn’t matter no-“ said Heidi, but before she could finish her sentence, Amy came. The animals had to hide. Fast. Leona stayed to stalk Amy.
“Right,” Amy said, looking for her phone.” Where did I leave it.” She muttered under her breath.
Oh no Leona thought. She’s coming my way.
The phone was on the table Leona was hiding under.
“There it is!” Amy exclaimed. I hope I didn’t wake the animals, Amy thought.
As she headed for her car, Leona crept behind her and leaped into the boot of her car without Amy noticing.
As Amy was driving home, she looked in the rear-view mirror. She saw Leona’s tail over one of the backseats and immediately and looked again but luckily for Leona, the force of the car made her gorgeous tail fall off of the seat.
When Amy got home and went inside, Leona crept through the garage door and some other rooms then hid under the dinning room table and waited for Amy to finish her dinner. Leona had to try to resist the piece of fishcake Amy dropped on the floor for her cats. Mittens (one of her cats) gave Leona some funny looks but Amy didn’t notice.
When Amy FINNALY finished her dinner, Amy went up to bed. Leona snuck in, hid under her bed and waited for Amy to fall asleep. Five minutes later, Leona made her move, she sliced her neck, cut her chest, then found a knife to look like a human did it and ran back to the zoo, scaled the fence and ran in.
The next day, no-one wanted a keeper to die so they decided to get Tiana the tiger to rip Sheena’s hair out and the skin off of her face next week.
In the meantime, the police came to the zoo to interrogate the keepers and ask if they saw anything.
Later that day, they arrested Daniel Holmes on suspicion of murdering Amy Shrub. The animals were filled with joy because Leona left a piece of her fur but the police thought it belonged to Mittens or Digby.
That night, all of the keepers were sticking together because they were scared, but they’ll forget it by next week, they always do.
Eventually, they shut down the zoo, people lost jobs and there were no more murders, the animals were left at the rotting zoo seeking sweet revenge. To be continued… 

Music songs and Ed Sheeran


It was a cold dark damp night and a young song singer and a son as a song writer .The singer Jake Fiddy and the son Harley Fiddy were famous singers who were fans with Ed Sheeran.
One of their songs was much better than dustbin bin bag he was called Justin Beaber but then know one listened to his songs because they were bad so he spent his money on fast cars and he crashed them all of them then he sheltered in the bin and laid on a bin bag now he wants to steal all of their songs  one of their songs. Is epic it is called Life it went like this:
“I‘ve always had it at computer games, and your brother always beats me and if I lost id go across and chuck all the controllers at the T.V and then he beats me and then he goes to sleep ‘because mum and dad were never there
And if our DVD breaks today you should of got a VCR because I’ve never owned a blue ray true say because mum and dad were because they were always in there underwear because they never had any time to spear to rare you should never cut your hair because I love the way you flick it off your shoulder   life is to short so can you wake me up.
“That song is epic” said Jake “I know” agreed Harley then suddenly a noise from the bin it was dustbin bin bag ha ha ha
“I know all of your plans I’ve been in here for two days “how didn’t notice him” said Jake 
“Ummmm”
“Maybe it’s because we had mc Donald’s for the past two days” replied Harley
Yes Harley that song was good and now I’m going to steal it and I will be top of the charts s



What Have I Done by Luke

Today the middle of summer twenty forty two, everything is getting replaced- no natural life, an obnoxious state. Only one thing to do when I drive over the ebony-black tarmac is to race but not just any race but the Pineslide tear up, a race where two hundred fifty mph is only average.

Finally after a month of waiting my new car has arrived from the best tuners in Pineslide. I’ve got a Lamborghini Adventador lp700-4 fully kitted: new turbos, flywheels, and a twin exhaust system. But best of all-a jet engine can get my car to reach three hundred fifty mph.

The following day I get into street race against my rival AJ.

We meet at Pinslide Downhill Traffic Control Systems.

We started by bribing a nearby pedestrian to hold two flags and shout go. Under the deep roar of our monstrous engine he shouted “Go!” as we accelerated I heard a loud bang I prayed that it was just the backfire from my twin exhaust system just as we approached the first bend he had too much understeer and I smashed right into him and I flipped into  a skyscraper reception “aaaaahhhhhh!” I screamed as my car crumpled up.

I end up in a posh hospital with I think about five doctors around me. I ask what I am doing here. They say that I could have died my lungs were crushed.

Two years later: I enter a race called Hilltop Slip `n’ Slide.

When I arrive I see I am not the only one to get another car and tune it up, the man says through the microphone three, two, one, “Go!” all of the cars accelerating created an opaque mist of thick smoke. Hitting the first bend I pull the handbrake up and drift through the first checkpoint overtaking three cars and entering second place behind my enemy AJ now onto the home stretch and suddenly AJ cuts me up, I dodge, swerve and smash in to him.

The next day in the front page of the newspaper it reads that a man called AJ had trapped his lungs in the crash but this time he couldn’t feel the pain.

He was gone. So I could stop my anger I drove my car off of the cliff into the canyon so now my car isn’t here I will not do any races. Now I can’t hurt anyone.
   

Fish and Chips by George 


It was Saturday and it was fish and chips night. Me and my dad were going to the local fish and chips and it was same as always two lovely cod (the people who wanted wasn’t the same), two medium chips and eight crispy crunchy battered sausages. There wasn’t a queue like normal just us and two other people.
But the two people before us both had a hefty order. The first person, who had definitely overeaten, ordered eight battered sausages and five large chips (he wasn’t watching his stomach!) Afterwards the second Person ordered eight cod, eight battered sausages and eight large chips (he was probably having a party). Then we ordered our two cod, two chips and eight battered sausages.
After we ordered, we sat down on the plastic chairs and waited for our amazing food. While we waited I thought about what I was going to play when I got home. Suddenly, I noticed that all of the food was moving and the people behind the counter kept getting confused. Soon everything started jumping down and attacking us,
“How are they moving?” said one of the customers looking up from his newspaper.
“What’s happening?” said the other standing up.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!” screamed the shop lady as she ran out the back door.                                        Soon the shop was in chaos…!
There were battered sausages on the ceiling, cod in the fizzy drinks machine, bits of batter on the floor and chips everywhere! Everyone was confused as much as me, I kept trying to eat the food but it wasn’t working.
  Soon I realised the best thing to do was to make peace. I saw that a big king battered sausage was standing on the top of the main counter, I walked towards him and asked,
“Why are you attacking us?”
“Why are you eating us?” the battered sausage asked (That was a good comeback!)
“If we stop will you? I offered
“Deal!” the battered sausage said as we shook hands.
So we skilfully rounded up the cod tossed back the chips and rolled up the battered sausages. Soon we had managed to stop all of the fish and chips and everyone calmed down, except for the overweight costumer who had run out of the shop screaming and the shop lady who had also ran out, and I started to talk with the king battered sausage about his past.
“How did you come alive?” I asked curiously.
“I was a plant but I fell in the battered sausages and was made” said the battered sausage.
“Wow that’s amazing!!!” I said “what about all the others?”
“I gave all of them a bit of life from my plant” he replied.
We talked for ages and I became bored and very very hungry. So despite me saying, the food would live it didn’t but was starving and it was scrumptious. Soon everyone joined in and it was delicious everyone agreed that it was the best meal they had ever eaten in their lives.


The Mystical Talent Show by Mellissa
I can’t believe it’s our last day in camping, I’ll really miss you guys”. Groaned Lei (the middle aged cousin).                                                                                                                                                                 “Yes but we still have one last adventure with our magical animal friends in Blossom Wood”. Answered Cora (the oldest cousin).                                                                                                                                “Well how are we gonna sneak off from breakfast with our parents?” questioned Isabell (the youngest cousin).                                                                                                                                                                  “Why don’t we say we’re going to the cubicle block to the toilet, since it’s close to where we’re going?”                                                                                                                                                                                      “Okay” said Cora and Isabell.
We did it, okay now ready, steady step into the hoof prints let’s GOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Now we are beautiful unicorns.
The grass smells fresh and looks a nice emerald green matching the trees leaves but it’s not as peaceful as it usually is. “Let’s go check it out”, Cora said.
“Everybody was staggering around in a rush, where’s everyone going? Let’s go check it out. And everyone seems arty”. Questioned the cousins.
“Sandy (the squirrel) what’s going on”. Shouted the cousins, up to Sandy’s high tree.                                                                                                                                                                                                    “Didn’t you hear, I’m holding a huge talent show? I do it every year, just normally with my Best Friend and my dancing partner, Rosie (another squirrel)”. Cried Sandy.                                                                                          “What happened?” asked the cousins.                                                                                                                                “She disappeared last year after the show, nobody knows what happened, I really hope she comes back”. Moaned Sandy.
“Is there anything we can do to help”. Questioned the cousins.                                                                               “Yes please”. answered Sandy, cheering up.                                                                                                                         “I’ve got a list but it’s a bit long,”. Said Sandy.                                                                                                          “Okay can we see it”, Asked Cora.                                                                                                                                          “Yeah here it is” said Sandy nervously.
 “Okay lets go” cheered Lei.                                                                                                                                                
The bears’ problem was first. One of the bears, answered the head tight rope walker, is tangled up in the rope! Eventually, the bear was free, after a lot of untying.
Next the deers and beavers had a swimming problem. Apparently they didn’t have enough space so we advised them to take it in turns in the lake since it wasn’t very big.
Last of all we had to help Sandy find a place to host the talent show. We looked in high places, low places, middle places and even underground but the best place was the centre of Blossom Wood, near the lake.
We decorated it with the forest flowers and painted it with colourful berries. When it was ready, everybody crowded the talent sow ground.
First up were some singing crickets. Second were three bunnies in pink skirts carrying hoops but what are they for and why are they standing in the hoops? Ohh, hula hooping.
“OH MY GOSH! We forgot to think of an act,” screamed Lei.
“Why don’t we do our friendship dance?” explained Cora.
“Okay, “replied Isabelle and Lei.
“Up next, my special friends the unicorns,” shouted Sandy.
The forest animals planned a surprise for us. The frogs knitted a green blanket and it was on top of the lake. WHAT A SURPRISE, it held us.
It was the best, last adventure ever.  

Dinos by Archie

“Hello, Hello,” shouted a random voice.
I woke up to see a person with a dino and two other people.
“Alfie, Luke is that you?” I said confused.
“Yup,” they both said slowly.
Then I ran to them and heard a titanic roar from a dinosaur.
“What are you on top of?” I asked.
“A velociraptor” a random person said.
“Hey look IT’S A T-REX!!!”I screamed.
We ran and we ran until.
“A CLIFF!” Alfie shouted with all his might.
We ran of the cliff and jumped in to the water. In the water there was 6 oro Megaladons snapping at the random person.
“AHH” he screamed.
We swam out of the water to the beach.
“Alfie? Luke? Hello” I shouted.
They were gone!!!
“hello?” I said alone.
I ran into the water and saw them drowning!
I dragged them to Shore and saved them
I told them everything. Just then we got interrupted by and angry Triceratops.
“Hey, that’s theirs, try and tame it,” I said.
“Okay,” Alfie and Luke said.
We made it unconscious and fed it and tamed it.
“Let’s ride it,” we all said.
We rode it to a big light and made a home.
“I’m tired,” we screamed
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“Hey, I found a bed,” said Luke.
“Is there 3,” Alfie said.
What’s that, I wondered.
“Hi it’s me, Connor. I found 16 velociraptors,” said Connor.
We got the dinosaurs to sleep and then we went to sleep as well.
6 hours later…
I woke up to a roar and I walked to the front door and BOOM!!!
A wall crushed in and all our dinosaurs got crushed in.
“WAKE UP!!!” I shouted with all my lungs.
“Ahhhh!!” Connor shouted.
I woke up everyone in the house and we looked out the windows and saw loads of T-rexes. 

Paper clip ghost by Koley

I wake up in the morning. I go down stairs to go get my breakfast but my cereal was not there, neither was my brother.
I am on the search for my brother. I think there’s a ghost. I am going to put my spider-man suit on. OMG!!!!!!!! I am spider- man. I have the powers of spider-man and that ghost probably just heard me.
OH no no no no no no no no no there’s a door rattling. I think it’s a ghost. I go to investigate and it’s still rattling. Oh it stopped! I opened the door. It’s a china doll moving. UH there is a ghost behind me and it looks so spooky.
Oh no no no no no no no no no no no he’s got a paper clip Ah, he is chasing me with the paper clip. And now he is attacking me. He is trying to stab me with it .
I need to get the death gauntlet and use it on him. Now I don’t know where has he gone. I don’t right now. I am scavenging through my stuff to find the death gauntlet. Oh I just forgot my brother had it last. I need to go get it oh my brother is locked in his wardrobe. “ah I will get you out brother ”shouted spider-man[also known as Koley] where did you just go Ben?.
I think the ghost came from Mist Island because
I am travelling to go get my brother from mist island. And I am now there. I have got you brother and now traverling to my home and we are living happily and the ghost is dead.
“Oh no no no no I think there’s zombies after us now. Ben you need to get that gun I will get this gun with the knife on the front or do you want this gun” exclaimed Koley.
We need to shoot them but we might not be able to because we don’t have a lot of ammo. And there’s too many of them. And I think big boy jeff that zombie from our game is there and he is to powerful to kill and you know that. Ok we might need to use the death gauntlet and  we need to find the six stones.
Ok I think we have to go to azgard to go get the the stones for the death gauntlet. Ok thet’s go get the stones to kill the zombies. And they are placed on the azgard planet. OK I am going to the azgard planet and the valkries are going to be protecting the stones from us unless they know who we are. So they will let us past to go get the stones. And if they let us past they should help us defeat the evil zombies. Oh no no no no no they have broken the door down we have to go down and fight them off BANG BANG BANG all dead.

                         THE END